poetry by steve parker
you havea haiku cold--ahachoo
I know. They keep sneezing out! Got a hankie I can borrow?
Yep. It's fairly clean! :o)
Hmm this slightly unclean thing worries me a bit. What's on it? Or who?
Intense piece, Steveman on a cross - this could be the sniper or the targetin the shimmer of distance – I immediately visualized the glint of the sun bouncing from the lens ANDthe hint of a distant target, obscured by heat energy – so it’s just a shimmersniper rifleI see the cross also as a crucifix, which I believe is pertinent to the scene, on many levelsLots of ways to take this, pretty damn good for a few words.Z.
I tend not to know from whom the nose blows. (John Donne-Blowin)
you have
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ahachoo
I know. They keep sneezing out! Got a hankie I can borrow?
ReplyDeleteYep. It's fairly clean! :o)
ReplyDeleteHmm this slightly unclean thing worries me a bit. What's on it? Or who?
ReplyDeleteIntense piece, Steve
ReplyDeleteman on a cross - this could be the sniper or the target
in the shimmer of distance – I immediately visualized the glint of the sun bouncing from the lens
AND
the hint of a distant target, obscured by heat energy – so it’s just a shimmer
sniper rifle
I see the cross also as a crucifix, which I believe is pertinent to the scene, on many levels
Lots of ways to take this, pretty damn good for a few words.
Z.
I tend not to know from whom the nose blows. (John Donne-Blowin)
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