Sunday, January 02, 2011

sniper rifle

man on a cross
in the shimmer of distance
sniper rifle

6 comments:

  1. you have
    a haiku cold--
    ahachoo

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  2. I know. They keep sneezing out! Got a hankie I can borrow?

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  3. Yep. It's fairly clean! :o)

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  4. Hmm this slightly unclean thing worries me a bit. What's on it? Or who?

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  5. Anonymous10:29 pm

    Intense piece, Steve

    man on a cross - this could be the sniper or the target

    in the shimmer of distance – I immediately visualized the glint of the sun bouncing from the lens

    AND

    the hint of a distant target, obscured by heat energy – so it’s just a shimmer

    sniper rifle

    I see the cross also as a crucifix, which I believe is pertinent to the scene, on many levels

    Lots of ways to take this, pretty damn good for a few words.

    Z.

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  6. I tend not to know from whom the nose blows. (John Donne-Blowin)

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