opening now to you
your new life your old
old life resprung
of waves and pulses
across warm wet
fields at night
of this of this
hurt of opening
we sing up disaster
opening still
eyes and pores
backlit with perception
of death the peeling back
of warm wet paper
from old walls
singing disaster
opening waveforms
into a woods
where you are open
peeling back as death
open as warm wet paper
lighted with perception
from old walls
waving with disaster
hurt of old wet walls
a lighted waveform
opening the waves
the pulses of fields
at night this open paper
pulling shapes of eyes
and pores new life in pulses
of waved walls collapsing lighted
as that kiss in waves and pulses
that tells all of collapses
of fields of waves
only this truth waving
of you wanting
what I want, like paper
to be here
in the same fields wanting
collapsing now
in light
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This is one of the most beautiful poems I have ever read - sincerely.
ReplyDeleteI love it
zec
Thank you. I have to do this stuff sometimes. The formulaics will get addressed in a while.
ReplyDeleteMiddle needs chopping out. Was only one of those two minute things. It will improve.
ReplyDeleteno no no, don't chop!
ReplyDeletezec
Still reading, still the same.
ReplyDeletezec.
warm wet paper from old walls - god that line!
ReplyDeletestill waiting to see the poem with 'that' other favourite line of mine!
zec.
I am so so so happy you didn't get the scissors out to this!
ReplyDeleteIt is just 'too delicous'.
zec.
too delicious!! I can type - really I can lol
ReplyDeleteI prefer it without the spacing, but hey what do I know!
ReplyDeleteStill have loadsa love for it.
zec.